How can I smooth this paper out and make it make sense?

At the time of World War II, the leader of Germany, Adolf Hitler, began a process of “purification”, which was the marauding of the Jew’s cultural property and the arts destruction. Hitler’s German-supremacy ideas led him to state that all art of the Jewish culture was considered intolerable. Groups of Nazis forcibly removed all Jewish art from both public and private areas, taking more than three million works of art during that time. The Nazi’s sold and destroyed all of the art and paintings of the Jews that did not reflect the views of the Reich. This assault on culture was one of the biggest thefts in history which forced the Jews to fall under the ownership of the Germans.

“….Acquiring art by force and the use of terror.” While the assault of the Nazis on culture continued to grow harsher, so did the ways in which the Nazi’s seized the art from the Jewish community. The Jewish people admired the abstract and impressionist paintings of their culture at museums during this time. Soon these “privately owned collections” were required to be given to the Nazi groups as a “donation” in order for the Jews to receive exit permits and many other things, such as immigration papers. After raiding of private museums the Nazis began to assault the public community. The Jewish people were threatened with various “bargains” and “exchanges”, which left them with no choice, but to give up their culture, which was to be added to the Nazi collection.

“The Nazi’s were as passionate about collecting and preserving these objects as they were destroying the lives of their owners.” The effects of Hitler on the Jews began to crumble their walls of culture which had various reasons behind it. The main reason for this assault was that their galleries of art conflicted with the ideal way of the Reich which said the concept of the Jewish art was intolerable. Another reason was that these “art collectors” had a strong obsession with hording paintings to create their own private collection. This ideology of the Nazi groups group showed their power and the enforcement of Hitler’s ideas. The Nazi regime during the time used its power to destroy the collections of art in the Jewish community not only because of their beliefs but greed.

Hitler and his Nazi regime managed to destroy and eliminate more than three million works of art from the Jews due to their ideology of the Reich. These “unacceptable” artifacts consisted of impressionist and abstract paintings, drawings and sculptures. The paintings were masterpieces by renowned artists such as Picasso, Gauguin, and Manet. These pieces stolen from the Jews were passionately burned by the Nazis which were about 5,000 paintings and were used to raise money for the Nazis. Masterpieces crumbled to the ground because of the strong loyalty for the Reich and the hatred inside the minds of the Nazi groups.

This dreadful act committed against the Jews was one of the greatest hardships at that time. The Jews were robbed of their possessions because of the strong assault from the Nazis and the Nazis power to destroy their identity. Owners of the artifacts were powerless when forced to give up their collection due to the persecution and blackmail they received. The German community was enriched with thefts from the Jews, giving them more power and wealth. In conclusion, the Jews did not lose materials, or money, but they lost their history.

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and i am in 9th but a 10th grade class
no specific method just 5 parargraphs
Wow your good
now its my turn to work on it…………..
how do you write so well?

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  1. Frankie D says:

    After each quote, I’d use a modified MLA citation method, so go (title of article, year). At the end of the paper, do a citation such as

    Title of article (year it was produced). the address of the web page. Retrieved on 11/24/08.

    During World War II, one of the primary goals of Adolf Hitler, the leader of Germany, was the purification and preservation of the Arian race. To achieve this, a mass confiscation and destruction began of Jewish cultural property. The destruction of this art as well as Hitler’s German-supremacy ideas led him to state that all art of the Jewish culture was considered intolerable. Groups of Nazis forcibly removed all Jewish art from both public and private areas, taking more than three million works of art during that time. The Nazi’s sold or destroyed all of the art and paintings of the Jews that did not reflect the views of the Reich. This assault on culture was one of the biggest thefts in history which forced the Jews to fall under the ownership of the Germans through the confiscation of the Jewish culture.

    “….Acquiring art by force and the use of terror.” While the assault of the Nazis on culture continued to grow broader in scale, so did the ways in which the Nazi’s seized art from the Jewish community. abstract and impressionist paintings of Jewish culture was favoured at the time by those practicing this religion and was prominently displayed at museums during this time. Soon these privately owned collections were required to be surrendered to the Nazi groups as a “donation” in order for the Jews to receive exit permits and many other things, including immigration papers. After raiding of private museums the Nazis began to assault the public community. The Jewish people were threatened with various bargains and exchanges, which left them with no choice but to give up their culture, which in turn was to be added to the Nazi collection.

    “The Nazi’s were as passionate about collecting and preserving these objects as they were destroying the lives of their owners.” It was not just art that Hitler was taking: it was the cultural cement that he was chipping away at and the Jewish identity and cohesion within that group began to fail as well. Hitler was able to justify his actions by various excuses, but the actual reasons behind this cultural assault can be narrowed down to human greed and ego. One of the main justifications for the destruction of art and the raiding of galleries was that Jewish art was intolerable and dirtied the conscious of the pure Arians. This ideology of the Nazi group showed their power and the enforcement of Hitler’s ideas. One of the main reasons for this massive cleansing of culture was that these art collectors, who were members of the Nazi party, had a strong obsession with hording paintings to create their own private collection. The Nazi regime during the time used its power to destroy the collections of art in the Jewish community not only because of their beliefs but because of simple human greed.

    The end result of this assault on culture was that Hitler and his Nazi regime managed to destroy and eliminate more than three million works of art from the Jews. This destruction was due in part to the ideology of the Nazi party and the fundamentals of the Reich ingrained by Hitler. Works that had been deemed unacceptable by the Nazi party consisted of impressionist and abstract paintings, drawings and sculptures. The paintings were masterpieces by renowned artists such as Picasso, Gauguin, and Monet. These stolen pieces were burned in ceremonies which were used as rallies to gain more support for Hitler and the Nazi party, to unite Germans through a new cultural activity and prevent the Arian race from being diluted by exposure to these verboten ideas. It is estimated that 5,000 paintings were used to raise money for the Nazis by their private sale. Masterpieces crumbled to the ground because of the strong loyalty for the Reich and the hatred inside the minds of the Nazi groups.

    Of all the atrocities committed against the Jewish community during World War II, this mass attack on culture may have had the most severe immediate impacts, as well as some of the most long lasting affects, on the Jewish culture. The Jews were robbed of their possessions because of the strong assault from the Nazis and the Nazis power to destroy the Jewish identity because it threatened the still developing idea of a pure Arian race. Owners of the artifacts were powerless and were forced to surrender their collections because of the strong-arm tactics employed by the Nazi party.. The German community was enriched with thefts from the Jews giving them more power and wealth. It was not simply a loss of physical goods as the primary affect of these thefts; it was the irreplaceable theft and destruction of a culture that transpired for which no adequate reparations can ever be made. .